the mars eventcher

Lately Room 13 wrote space stories using the structure of a narrative. This is Dash's writing! Enjoy and try spot his problem that reflected a change to the characters and try idenitfy the form of his setting.

The Mars Adventure- By Dash.

chpter 1

T-10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 blast off Jack,James and Jake are going to mars to tack pitchs and explor. jack was very smart with technolg and had brown hear, james was very sdmart and had brown hear and brown eyes and jakje  had jood eye dears. they cont wate intle theythey where in space when they where there. 2 hous later when they where finle there they could see stars every. about 10 mints later jake wantid  to play hideand scek. jake started "i spy whith my little eye something beging with m."they where thing for ages intill they gave up. so jake sead it "moon" he sead then he pontid to it. soundle it came closer and closer and then there was more and more. then it was so cloce they they got hit three times! then there endgin went out. then jake fantid bang !!!!!!!!!!!!! they where domed sodle they saw fule floting out side. so jack went to get it he pot on his space sout and tide a rope arond him. then he grabed it then pored in the endgen. the tock of and landid on mars. 

chapter 2

after 2 days on mars they toke off. jack was skerd that the fule will go out as he smalt it borning. all the sodin these small dots started to come to gether. then so mutch small dots went to gether it corsd a back hole. jake skremed they where domed and they cepet on panking  all the jake had an eye dear.  it was to fill the balck hole with space gung. so they got all the space gunk they Cod find. a fue hows later they ran out of space gunk aaaaaaaaa   aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa they sead. but then jake stoped he had an eye dear it was to explod the black hole. so they posht the nicle at the black hole and explode but when all the dust disserperd the the black hole was still. there they panked and pankt then jake and jamees ran to there space bed. and hid under it it was all up to jack he shot a nother nicle and that time the black hole srank.

chapter 3

jack cept on shoting nicles at the black hole and it sronk and sronk intle it tornd in to little dots. so he quikkle explod the dots then safle lane did on earth. and pot the pitchers on google and went tothere home.

the end!